长沙中考英语作文1

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教师姓名： 李老师 学生姓名： 龙浩宇 学 校： 雅博教育 年 级： 初三 授课日期及时间：2015-02-08 08:00 --10:00 辅导科目： 英 语

教学目标：人物类写作指导

教学重难点：人物类写作指导

教学内容：

好作文的标准

1. 卷面书写干净， 整洁，无涂抹，标 点，大小写正确。

2. 3. 结构合理。首尾呼应，段落分明。

4. 句式多样，连词使用恰当。

5. 行文表达无语言点错误，立意高。

书面表达评分标准：

第一档：（15-13分）

第二档：（12-9分）

第三档：（8-5

语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清

长沙市2010年中考英语作文

假设你的笔友（来自美国的Mike ）下个月将到你校交流学习，请你把Mike 的情况提前介绍给同学们。

要求：

1、内容包括（1）Mike 的家庭情况。

（2）Mike 的性格特点和兴趣爱好。

（3） Mike的父母和同学对他的评价。

（4） Mike来中国的原因。

2、字数：60－80词。

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用 心 做 教 育 2 3、短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。

参考范文：My pen pal, Mike, will come to our school to study next month. He is an American.He is fifteen. There are three people in his family. His father is an engineer,

and his mother is a teacher. He is outgoing and he likes to help others. In his free time, he likes listening to pop music and playing basketball. His parents and classmates all think he is a lovely boy. He wants to learn Chinese, and he loves Chinese food. That’s the reason why he will come to China. I hope you can make friends

with him.

话题1. 一、作文题目：60

提示词：there be, not only… help,

1. I’m a

在所有的运动中，我最喜欢乒乓球。

我经常帮助同学学英语。

我经

我经常请求父母和老师的帮助。

9. I’m interested in music and often listen to it after class. 我对音乐感兴趣，而且课下经常听。

10. I usually tell them what I want. 我通常告诉他们我想要什么。

11. I always turn off the lights when I leave the room. 我离开房间时总是关上灯。

12 .I often spend an hour doing my homework every day.我每天花费一个小时的时间做作业

三、两篇范文（A 为基础优秀同学准备，B 为基础一般同学准备）

范文一 (A档) ：

My name is Daming. There are three people in my family, my parents and I. My school is not very big but very beautiful. The teachers are not only kind to us but also very knowledgeable. The students are very lively

www. yabo-edu.com 用 心 做 教 育 3 and clever. I can get on well with them. I often help my classmates with their study after school.

I have some hobbies, such as reading English novels and listening to music. How relaxing and joyful they are! （79 words）

范文二（B 档）：

I’m a middle school student and my name is Daming. There are three people in my family. Every day I often go to school by bus. My school is beautiful and clean. Our teachers are very nice but sometimes they are strict with us. I have lots of hobbies, such as playing football, reading English books and so on. I like reading books after school. The books are not only interesting but also useful. （74 words）

作业：长沙市2008

下图是Gina 对班上同学的周末活动进行调查后得出的结果；想

想你和你的同学是如何度过周末的? 写一篇名为“

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